Animatic 01
Action Beats/Story Beats
The scene starts with
the singular character, Brando, appearing in this bare environment that only
consists of a door as far as Brando can see. The audience discover things at
the same time as the character. Before he was plucked from his life, Brando was
walking down the street muttering to himself about his life. He wants better
for himself but he is too comfortable where he is so doesn’t take the necessary
risks for change. His mutterings consist of how he doesn’t take opportunities
that present themselves.
1: Brando starts off in the environment with the magic door.
2: At first he doesn’t quite realise where he is.
3: He has his head down doing head movements like he is
giving himself a ‘talking to’.
These are his emotions that he
has carried over from the world he has been plucked from. He is not happy with
his life and wants change for the better but he doesn’t want to leave his life
that is safe.
4: He begins to realise that he is in some strange environment.
Confusion
creeps across his face.
5: Walks towards closed door.
Confusion
turns to curiosity.
6: Examines door, looks around the doorframe to only see the
other side of the environment.
7: Opens door and looks confused.
Slight
frustration and some more confusion.
7: b: he makes a move away from the door, not wanting to
bother with whatever is happening.
His
face reads of someone who doesn’t want the hassle.
7: c: He physically stops himself then he turns around back
towards the door.
7: d: he pauses for a moment, eyes closed, deep breath.
8: Takes a step through the door.
At this
point he has the appearance of “fuck it, let’s see what is going on”.
9: Comes out looking different (Franklin rig).
10: Doesn’t realise at first, he turns around to look at the
door once more.
He is a
little disappointed, he worked himself up to expect some special to happen.
11: Looks down the doorframe and suddenly notices his rather
large feet.
12: Movements of panic as he feels his face and looks at his
hands.
Horror.
13: Looks back at the door – realisation of what must have
happened.
Desperate
emotions as he doesn’t know what to do.
14: In a determined fashion, storms through the door once
more.
15: Comes out as a chubby kid.
16: Despair and anguish at the second appearance change.
Shock.
Now he is really desperate.
17: He doesn’t have much hope at this point.
18: He goes back through the door and comes out as Sam (the
female).
19: His mood picks up a little as he admires the body but
when he tries to walk it fails.
He is
breaking down, he is a woman and he can barely walk with the slim legs/small
feet.
Even
more desperation.
20: He hobbles back to the door and walks through.
21: He comes out as a dog.
22: He chases his tail a bit and rolls onto his back.
23: The door closes.
A moment of silence as he looks
at the door. His face also silent of emotion. Tongue out panting, wide eyes
and bouncing ears is all that is given away.
24: He dashes towards the door and starts scratching at the
bottom of it.
Panic
rushes over him.
25: He realises he might be stuck forever.
26: He takes a few steps back and sits with his back to the
door and his head down.
He
almost doesn’t know what to do, he has almost accepted his fate.
27: A few moments of him with his back to the door.
28: The door opens suddenly.
28: a: His ears pick up the sound and his head picks up.
29: He quickly turns around and sprints for the door.
30: He comes out as his original self.
31: He is relieved and overjoyed, he hugs himself and feels
his face to double check it is him.
He
couldn’t be happier.
32: He then confidently walks to the right of screen.
33: a: Before leaving, he looks back at the magical door
with a wry smile.
Suggest
he has gotten the meaning behind what has happened to himself.
33: He goes through another door….to leave speculation that
he might have went through another magic door.
Summary:
This is my first animatic but I have got feedback on it from Brian Robinson so I will have a new cut ready for next Tuesday along with revised story beats.
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